Monday, November 28, 2011
Mankind's Saving Grace or Family Romance
Wordsworth associates a youthful perspective on nature with anguish in desire, anxiety, and unconsummated love, whereas his view of a matured and more resolved bond with nature is one of peace; a quiet and enlightened recognition. It means an appreciation for the small moments in life and simple pleasures of living, such as "life and food" and at that "for future years" to come. He claims that there is comfort in the continuum of life--in the fact that even after we "are laid to sleep," another generation will sprout up and continue to feel and enjoy the impression of nature upon them.
Form & Content in "We Are Seven"
"But they are dead; those two are dead!
Their spirits are in heaven!"
'Twas throwing words away; for still
The little maid would have her will,
And said, "Nay, we are seven!"
The fairly simple language and rhyme scheme are so musical and easy to read in order to show that, much like the little maiden shows the pompous-seeming narrator (who remains unmoved by her wonderful way of treating death and insists that his trying to talk sense into her is wasted), the most fruitful, beautiful and deeply meaningful messages don’t always come in beautiful epic stanzas with gorgeous metaphors, etc. We can find so much beauty and truth in simplicity as opposed to many people’s incessant need to forever make things more complicated to find beauty in them, as well as the beauty and truth in just accepting the way the world functions instead of incessantly questioning its ways.
"Of eye, and ear,-both what they half create, And what perceive;”
The fact that Tintern Abbey provides a backdrop for Wordsworth’s poem is relevant in ways both literal and symbolic. Composing this work after a visit to the Gothic abbey afforded Wordsworth the ideal setting for a rumination on nature, the passage of time and the gains and losses of memory. The fact that the Abbey does not appear in the poem renders it more of a symbolic destination for Wordsworth, eschewing the splendor of the actual ruins for a sublime psycho-visual creation of mind and memory, as
“a lover of the meadows and the woods,
And mountains; and of all that we behold
From this green earth; of all the mighty world
Of eye, and ear,--both what they half create,
And what perceive;” (103-107)
An abbey is traditionally a place of contemplation, spirituality, and transcendence. Wordsworth moves away from Tintern Abbey towards unbounded nature, perhaps as a metaphor for moving away from religion as the means to attain transcendence and finding spirituality in nature. The absence of the actual Abbey in the poem and its emphasis on nature also points to this move towards nature as the conduit to transcendence. If nature and sensory perception are such conduits, the space of contemplation would then become the mind as opposed to an external site. As Wordsworth stated in the quote Professor Jones provided from the Preface to Lyrical Ballads, poetry stems from an emotion evoked through tranquility (nature) which is then contemplated until “the tranquillity [the extrinsic/sensual experience] gradually disappears, and an emotion, kindred to that which was before the subject of contemplation, is gradually produced, and does itself actually exist in the mind.”
Thus, the mind becomes a space for both contemplation and creation, and the senses serve as both perceptive and creative forces in that they take in “all that we behold” and interpret such impressions that become catalysts for reflection and artistic creation. This idea of sensory/physiological perception as opposed to cognitive/conceptual perception to me relates to the notion of the picturesque landscape. The artist sees an actual landscape, reflects on it, and then interprets it in a way that transcends reality. Thus what is presented as a landscape is a fusion of both what the “eye and ear…half create, and what [we] perceive”.
The Light of Setting Suns: Wordsworth and the Sublimity of Nature
Wordsworth’s meditation on his visit to the banks of the Wye at Tintern Abbey is an excellent example of a characteristic poem encapsulating the values of the romantic age. While his claims that the poem was conceived entirely in his head and transcribed with no changes have faced a great deal of skepticism from many literary critics, his deeply immersive language used to describe the power and beauty of nature is nevertheless an amazing of its own that has helped characterized some of the connecting themes of the Romantic Age.
Although the Tintern Abbey itself is never physically described, its presence in the title immediately suggests religious connotations to the poem, however in line with the “romantic spirit”, Wordsworth religion appears to be nature, with a pantheistic perspective present throughout all mentions of God. For example, “Of elevated thoughts; a sense sublime/ Of something far more deeply interfused,/ Whose dwelling is the light of setting suns,/And the round ocean, and the living air,/ And the blue sky, and in the mind of man,/ A motion and a spirit, that impels/ All thinking things, all objects of all though,/And rolls through all things…” (96-103). We see hear that the motion and a spirit are entirely natural forms, suggesting that God is quite literally nature, and not some anthropomorphized removed being. These lines are also excellent examples of the way Wordsworth is able to paint the picturesque with such ease; moving from the light of setting suns to the round ocean and blue sky, and then into green meadows and woods, Wordsworth identifies nature as the “anchor of my purest thoughts” and the “guardian of my heart, and soul/ Of all my moral being.” Clearly to Wordsworth, nature itself is a religious experience.
While I too have to remain skeptical of whether such a well-crafted poem could be conceived fully in his mind and then transcribed literally, Wordsworth’s reflections on nature and the power it holds over him are supreme examples of romantic literature.
Body to Mind
Memory and Tintern Abbey
Though Wordsworth no can no longer frolic through the woods of his youth, he seems to have resolved himself to this fact and is able to achieve a similar (though more sober) kind of joy in his current aged state of reflection and slow observation. In the experiential moment of running through the woods and participating in the rituals of youth there is not time for reflection or appreciation, yet once infirmities overcome the senses and the mind only is left to us, then there is a replenishment of the soul and mind in remembering those moments. All this is well and good, yet what if the mind itself is degenerating as well?
Our memory is an imperfect vessel for the experiences and emotions of youth, so while we may have the feeling of being able to look back and replay moments past, in actuality these moments were not actually how we remember them. However, I believe that there is comfort in this too. Wordsworth looks back on his youth and sees only good; pastoral images of his youthful self dashing through fresh wilderness and cool stream, though nowhere does he mention the heartbreak that comes with education or the pangs of experience, thus it seems that perhaps his memory is somewhat skewed. I trust in this skewing, I choose to trust in the quiet treachery of memory to cause us to remember the good and slowly forget the bad and the neutral until finally our later years become dominated by the repetition of the mantra, "things used to be better," until finally it becomes true, and in our minds things truly were better.
The Role of Tintern Abbey as Inspiration
Wordsworth was not the only poet (or artist) for whom Tintern Abbey seems to have served as inspiration. That fact is unsurprising, given the abbey's grandeur and the romantic themes inherent in decay and ruin. These other poems and pieces of art are interesting, nonetheless, for the insight they might give about how the abbey serves as inspiration.
The artist JMW Turner apparently painted the abbey several times. One example is here:
His paintings emphasize the abbey's size and the romantic "wildness" of it, as with the plants growing along the arches in the painting above. Compare to a picture of the abbey in the present day:While the landscape has certainly changed since the 1700s (the painting was from 1794, the year after Wordsworth's visit), it seems likely that Turner still romanticized the abbey considerably in order to show it as a symbol of the past being literally overgrown in its decay.
Two other poets were famously inspired by the abbey: Tennyson and Allen Ginsberg (an interesting pair, to be sure). Tennyson wrote the short poem "Tears, Idle Tears." Similarly to Wordsworth's, Tennyson's poem discusses the past and how we view it. The two poets seem to have been driven by the abbey to write upon the same basic theme.
Ginsberg's experience at the abbey was probably somewhat different; he was reportedly on LSD at the time of his visit; given that, his poem ("Wales Visitation") is remarkably similar, discussing the influence of the past. He shows a special interest in both the pastoral landscape that enchanted Wordsworth and the idea of the "bard" (he references Wordsworth and Blake by name, as a matter of fact).
Through all of these works of art, the influence of the abbey is remarkably consistent in its evocation of the past and the idea of memory.
Tintern Tempo: Pacing and line breaks provide excitement and passion
Cycles in Tintern Abbey
A Return to Nature
we are seven
In “We are Seven” a man comes across a young girl and begins a conversation. The girl is eight years old, which is also the age Wordsworth was when his mother died. The speaker cannot accept that the young girl still feels she is one of seven siblings even after two of her siblings have died even though she now lives at home alone with her mother. The poem begins with the question of what a child should know of death and at first it seems as if the little girl cannot quite conceptualize death. In fact she seems to be in denial about the deaths of her siblings, especially because she continues to spend time with them and sing to them. However, at the end it seems as though the little girl understands more about life and death than the speaker. She is unwilling to cast her dead siblings out of her life and instead accepts change as a part of nature and continues to live her life as positively as she can. This mirrors the conclusions drawn in “Lines Written in Early Spring” in that, the young girl and the speaker of “Lines Written in Early Spring” have come to terms with nature and the pain it brings- the fact that “man has of man.” In “Lines Written in Early Spring” nature, like the young girl, is described as “fair,” with the capacity to make decisions and experience joy. In the end, nature or the young girl is the stronger force and the speaker or humanity fails in rejecting nature or sticking to his miserable ways of thought. In “Lines Written in Early Spring” the speaker is distraught at the notion of perfecting nature and is driven to question the mistakes of humanity. In “We are Seven” the speaker is also distraught by the young girls denial of her dead siblings and instantly feels compelled to question her as to how she can still believe she has seven siblings. Wordsworth describes the girl as having a “woodland air” to liken her to nature because youth, like nature, should not be tainted or corrected.
Sunday, November 27, 2011
Narrative in the Music of "Der Erlkönig"
Schubert, at the beginning of "Erlkönig," sets the mood for the poem by visualizing the first stanza ("Who rides so late through night and wind?... a father with his child... clasps him tight..."). It begins in g minor driven by incessant triplets in the right hand of the piano, reflecting the urgency of the galloping hooves, and a sinister and eerie motif in the left hand that provides form and unity to the piece. The piano accompaniment is the foundation for the entire song and is the vehicle that takes us from character to character, key to key, and stanza to stanza.
As a result of character changes, progression in the drama, and overall expectation for a piece of music to have contrasting/interesting material, "Der Erlkönig" experiences a number of key areas via the continuous triplets in the piano. These key areas do not linger for very long and are defined by their cadences (perfect-authentic cadences...). It was a delight to discover that the progression of keys in this song actually spell out the sinister motif that distinguishes this piece so well (i-III-IV-v-VI-v-i).
It is quite fun to find all the little tricks and subtleties that Schubert incorporates into his Lieder (German art songs) writing in order to reflect the drama of the text and/or create its own narrative. There are many more which I have not mentioned here so have a listen:
music/video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8noeFpdfWcQ
score:
http://imslp.org/wiki/Erlk%C3%B6nig,_D.328_%28Op.1%29_%28Schubert,_Franz%29
Saturday, November 26, 2011
Parallels of Acceptance in "To Autumn" and "Tintern Abbey"
A frustrated futility permeates most of John Keats’s Odes, as the speaker struggles desperately to transcend his mortality and realize the eternality of the beauty around him — both in art and in nature. The hopeless questions of “Grecian Urn” and the “draughts of vintage” in “Nightingale” exemplify a refusal to accept human transience. Yet the final ode, “To Autumn,” replaces this refusal with a calm acceptance — or, more accurately, a rejection of the entire quest.
This rejection echoes the “suspension” of human blood in Wordsworth’s “Tintern Abbey.” As time elapses and the speaker leaves behind the “hour of thoughtless youth,” he is troubled by the “lofty” questions his old age poses. Yet, as Keats’s speaker did in “Autumn,” he finds “abundant recompence” for his lost innocence and forced confrontation with human temporality not in any answers to those questions but to a cessation of them.
In “Autumn” the passage of time and the agency of nature is suspended, allowing the speaker to find joy and transcendence in the swelling of the beauty around him in the present. Similarly, the elder speaker of “Tintern Abbey” feels the “burden of the mystery…of all this unintelligible world…lighten’d” as the “affectations” of the natural splendor around him “quiets” the burning questions of human mortality. He is “laid asleep/In body, and becomes a living soul,” just as Keats’s deified autumn is portrayed as lying lazily asleep, allowing him to revel in the swelling life and beauty of swallows gathering and sheep bleating.
Both poems center on speakers who are facing the twilight of their lives who are “disturbed” with the “elevated thoughts” encapsulated by the grandeur of the world around them. While Keats’s odes allow us to see the anguished process that leads to eventual acceptance, we see parallels to that acceptance in an elder Wordsworth’s reaction to nature.
Monday, November 21, 2011
Wordsworth’s Romanticization of the Elderly
Two of the poems for Tuesday’s class, “Simon Lee” and “Old Man Travelling,” are stories about a narrator who comes across on old man on his travels. Wordsworth’s poem “The Old Cumberland Beggar”, which we read earlier in the course, contains similar subject matter.
Wordsworth seems to romanticize the old men in his poems in multiple ways. First, he emphasizes their connectedness with nature. He idealizes them as good people. He acknowledges their decrepit physical states but asserts that their age has made them more respectable than younger people.
In all three of the poems, the narrator encounters an old man in nature. Simon Lee and his wife live in a moss-grown hut of clay (line 57), and both the old man travelling and the Cumberland Beggar are perpetually on the road. Because they live in nature, these men are connected to it in a way that other people are not. Simon Lee lives off the land. The old man travelling is guided by nature to perfect peace (lines 12-13). The Cumberland Beggar’s eyes “have been so long familiar with the earth [that they] no more behold the horizontal sun rising or setting,” (lines 180-182).
Although the men are pitiable because of their old age, Wordsworth portrays them as venerable as well. Simon Lee’s gratitude makes the narrator mourn for him prematurely. The old man travelling possesses many admirable qualities, including patience, peace, and thoughtfulness. Wordsworth represents the Cumberland Beggar as useful (line 67) and deserving of reverence (line 170). Some of these men’s respectability comes from their age, as it has taught them good qualities and made them stoic and persistent in their endeavors.
Wordsworth acknowledges that the men in these poems are in poor health, even near death. However, their “animal tranquility and decay” are the roots of their best qualities. Wordsworth used his writing to promote treating the elderly with kindness. I guess it’s a good thing that Wordsworth lived to be 80, so he could take advantage of the advice he gave to others throughout his writing career.
Anecdote for Fathers: The Epitome of Romanticism
Wordsworth and Nature
Connections between nature and death in "We Are Seven"
The emphasis on nature and immortality in Wordsworth’s We Are Seven shows an underlying Romantic idea about our connection to nature through death. The child in this poem treats her dead brother and sister as if they are still alive, causing the narrator of the poem surprise because he sees that they are obviously dead. The girl’s description of her brother’s and sister’s death surrounded by her playing outside with them before death or around their graves after their deaths ("So in the church-yard she was laid /And all the summer dry / Together round her grave we played / My brother John and I.”) shows a connection for the girl between death and nature. She associates playing and being outdoors with being with her dead siblings. Also, her sister Jane lay inside in bed in pain, and when she died she was buried outside, where she was no longer in pain. This positive association between nature and sensation that the girl makes emphasizes the healing qualities of nature. The immortality of the girl’s dead siblings that is only apparent when she is outside with them can be seen not only as a childish faith but also as an expression of the Romantic emphasis on nature and the idea that when we die, we become a part of nature. The girl probably wouldn’t have seen it this way, but this poem might be trying to put the idea into the narrator’s head and our heads subtly.
Sunday, November 20, 2011
Thomas and Beethoven: Darkness to Light
Thomas Cole’s “Lake with Dead Trees” reminds me of Beethoven’s idea of “darkness to light”. In this painting, the part closer to us is mostly about darkness or death. We see lots of dead trees. The woods look dark, although the trees in it are supposed to be live. The clouds are dark and low. As we look further, the darkness is gradually lightened up. Further from us, there are mountains covered by green forests, a bit of the blue sky, and rosy clouds. Thus, Thomas shows the process from darkness to light by changing colors and objects. How does Beethoven show this process in his music? He often starts a piece with a minor mode, which depicts darkness, and ends it with a major mode, which depicts light. For example, the 3rd movement of his Piano Sonata 110 starts with in melancholic B minor and ends triumphantly in A major mode.
Interestingly, Beethoven often marks the moment of triumph with religious elements, such as a fugue and a holy chorale. In the 3rd movement of his Piano Sonata 110, a fugue appears twice (each time in a different key), and the movement finally ends with it. I guess Beethoven marks the achievement of light in this way, because he believes we transcend our misery through religious thinking.
Human being needs help to conquer the darkness, (maybe because the darkness in human world is “mind-forg’d manacles.”) But as we can see in the painting, natural creatures go from darkness to light naturally—trees die and grow; the sky covered by dark clouds will appear blue. Do natural creatures have a privilege? Or are they telling us a truth, that after dark comes light?
Here is a link to Pollini's performance of the 3rd movement of Beethoven Piano Sonata 110.
Wednesday, November 16, 2011
To Autumn and Dovedale by Moonlight
This Lime Tree Bower: Romanticism and Transportation
For the AMAM presentations my group did Garden of the Princess by Claude Monet. This painting looked as if it was divided into three sections: a garden, the city and the sky. Aside from the sky, the painting was very rigid; it had sharp angles and was very structured and sectioned. There is also a fence separating the perfectly pruned garden from the city area, which was full of people as if to clearly separate nature and industry. At the time that Monet painted this painting city planning and industry were taking off and Paris was becoming an important metropolis. Even though Monet created a divide between humans/city and nature, he depicts such a controlled unnatural representation of nature that it serves as a production of this new growing industrialism. This notion contrasts the romantic notion of a wild and free nature. However the sky, unlike the rest of the painting is knotted in itself, wild and free. This is completely opposite to what Wordsworth writes, “So pure the sky, so quiet was the air!
So like, so very like, was day to day!” Instead the painting has an uncontrolled sky and a seemingly controlled day-to-day life. It is almost as it the sky is coming at you when looking at the picture. The sky seems to warn against trying to control nature. Towards the end of the poem, Wordsworth writes: “Farewell, farewell the heart that lives alone, / Housed in a dream, at distance from the Kind! / Such happiness, wherever it be known, / Is to be pitied; for 'tis surely blind.” The word “kind” is like nature or humankind. Thus what is natural to humankind is to be in an uncontrolled true form of nature according to Wordsworth, and in my opinion according to the painting Monet feels the same way.
hea[r]t
Monday, November 7, 2011
The Process of Writing Poetry in "Bright Star"
I had never seriously thought about the actual process of writing a poem until watching this movie and seeing it played out on screen. I understand that different writers must have different ways of writing efficiently, but I imagined that poetry writing is a process that a writer would carry out from start to finish by him or herself. This could be a very modern or very naive way to look at it. I'm not sure. The film “Bright Star”, focuses specifically on the last years of John Keats' life and a little about the creation of some of his last works. What I found really interesting about the portrayal of Keats as a writer in this movie is how closely he works to Charles Brown- but only while he is trying to write- not actually writing. In the scene in which Fanny Brawne delivers a basket of biscuits for Keats' dying brother Tom, Keats and Brown seem to literally be laying around “waiting for inspiration” as if it was going to just waltz through the door at any moment (which, ironically, it kind of did seeing as Brawne would later be his last main source of poetic inspiration). When Keats does fall intensely in love and is suddenly full of inspiration for writing, it is portrayed in a scene that I interpreted as such:
We see Keats pulling up a chair to a cherry blossom (I'm not sure, I'm just guessing here) tree that's in full bloom (symbol for his own inspiration being in full bloom). After he has sat down the camera is fully focused on his face. His facial expression is one of clarity, even though he is squinting slightly, perhaps implying the creative process behind the beautiful poetry that is being narrated by his own voice in the background. This is followed by a montage of shots of Fanny, himself writing the poetry onto little pieces of paper, and we are then lead to a scene where Brown and Keats are moving the little pieces of ink-ridden paper all over a table.
I think the first instance where we see Keats successfully writing poetry is presented this way in order to emphasize how important it was to work with other writers during this period in time, but only to a certain degree. I think it also shows how work is pulled out of you when you are drastically affected by something in your life. This could obviously be completely dramatized, Hollywood-ized, or whatever you want to call it. I found it very interesting nonetheless and it made me think about why I had this image in my head of a writer with a head in his hands, wildly scribbling alone in a candlelit room. It's because, and maybe I'm wrong, less and less writers are known for being in fabulous collectives with other famous writers. It's almost fantasy-like to imagine that multiple people whom you consider talented or acknowledge as famous, and people who you learned about on separate occasions all knew each-other and interacted. With the exception of grouping them together as “contemporary writers”, I feel like I hear about famous modern writers doing and publishing works by themselves more than with others. If I am completely wrong (because I really would not consider myself an expert in this field) I would love to hear what's really happening in the contemporary writing scene in a comment.
Happiness and Hemlock
Human Limitation in "Ode to a Nightingale" and "Ode on a Grecian Urn"
“Ode to a Nightingale” begins with an exasperated expression of human limitation: “My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains/my sense…” The speaker wishes he could “dissolve” and become as pure as the innocent and beautiful nightingale, yet is repeatedly restricted by the transience of life and the particularly cruel tragedy of old age (“where palsy shakes a few, sad, last gray hairs, / Where youth grows pale, and spectre-thin, and dies”.) The fact that numbness, a lack of feeling, “pains” the speaker evokes a yearning for lasting connection that came to define the Romantic period. A lack of feeling, it appears, is more painful than any physical anguish.
As in the artwork of “Ode on a Grecian Urn,” the speaker speaks in envy of the eternity of beauty of the nightingale’s song, saying “Thou wast not born for death, immortal Bird! … The voice I hear this passing night was heard/In ancient days by emperor and clown.” The invocations of both death and the “passing night” place the nightingale and its song in direct contrast with humanity and its fleeting mortality.
The human mind is limited by a lack of “light,/Save what from heaven is with the breezes blown/through verdurous glooms and winding mossy ways.”
However, whereas the concerns expressed in the questions “Grecian Urn” merely go unanswered, in “Nightingale” the speaker actually embraces this humanity. He rejects “Bacchus and his pards,” instead choosing to transcend his mortality through the “viewless wings of Posey.” And although the word “forlorn” is a cold reminder of man’s limitations, the song of the nightingale — representation of eternity and beauty and “truth” — remains just in the “next valley-glades” seemingly attainable upon an inevitable but “easeful” death.
A Bright Star held in This Living Hand: Two Poems, Two Sides of Love
Keats' "Hand"
In eight lines of Keats’ “This Living Hand” he evokes a condition similar to that of Frankenstein’s creation, who exists in a purgatory-like space between life and the vast, unknowable state beyond human existence. The hand Keats describes is clearly living, as the title states, yet it seems to be on the precipice of death or at least mortal extinguishment. This juxtaposition is illustrated through the contrast of temperature imagery in the first five lines of the poem. The living hand is at first “warm and capable of earnest grasping,” but quickly shifts to a statement in the conditional: “would, if it were cold and in the icy silence of the tomb…chill thy dreaming nights…” In the fifth line the conflation of heat and heart, whether purposeful on Keats’ part or not, fits with poem’s overall association of warmth and life. This emphasis on sensation/sensory perception exemplifies a motif the can be traced throughout many of the work’s we have examined, including works of both Shelleys, Blake, and Hemans. I believe this poem can be read as a Romantic rumination on the precipice between this life and the next, but reading footnote 1 on page 949 also suggested another interpretation related to the senses as the means to explore the fluid boundaries between inner and outer life, as well as life and death. This footnote suggests that the “hand” in Keats’ title might refer to handwriting, or the creation of the hand, as opposed to describing an actual hand. “This living hand, now warm and capable” is perhaps a personification of a poem or the act of writing verse that can reach out to the reader with vivacity but could also turn cold and dreary. If one sucked the sanguine nature from a poem and wrote on the terrific or sublime the poem could impart the effect of “the icy silence of the tomb” and might “haunt thy days and chill thy dreaming nights…” In this way, Keats could be referring to a poem traversing the boundary between the expression of vitality and finality.
Ode to a Nightingale: Exploring the Transcendent Powers of Sound and Music
- "Singest of summer in full-throated ease." This line literally feels like the summer of the poem; the true spark and light amongst so much darkness and gloom. The alliteration of singest of summer makes this line even sweeter.
- "Here, where men sit and hear each other groan." It feels like he is reducing the world he is stuck in to a melody of men's groans of despair. He has created a dark song for the life of men.
- "Darkling I listen; and for many a time I have been half in love with easeful Death, call'd him soft names in many a mused rhyme." This fixation with death is communicated through "listening" and "calling." Keats has forged a sonic relationship with death.
- "To take into the air my quiet breath."This line echoes the previous ones and actualizes this relationship between death and noise. There is a physical exchange between the "quiet" breath of Keats and the air of death.
- "While thou art pouring forth thy soul abroad in such an ecstasy!" Here Keats is referencing the wild ecstasy of the songbird's ability to transcend life and death through the creation of song.
Duration of Soul in "Ode to a Nightingale"
"Ode to a Nightingale"
John Keats “Ode to a Nightingale”: Eternity
“Ode to a Nightingale” ventures
between the realms of life and death, ultimately showing glimpses of the
author’s perception of eternity inspired from the sight and song of the
nightingale. The author opens the poem by describing his current state: “My
heart aches and drowsy numbness pains,” (1). While he appears to be mentioning
dizziness or the results of a sublime experience upon seeing the nightingale, with
the mention of “hemlock” (the poison ingested by Socrates) within the next line
one can’t help but wonder if the author is not actually departing from the world
of the living to the world of the dead, or the seemingly eternal nightingale.
“The weariness, the fever, the
fret.” (23), Keats characterizes the world of the living, the world he is leaving
or wishes to leave, as something undesirable compared to the beauty of the
nightingale. He then uses phrases such as “flowers are at my feet”, and
“embalmed in darkness” (41-43) to further underline the notion of his death in
this moment. From this emphasis on passing from life to death, the author
paints the vision of the nightingale, an “immortal Bird”.
The author illustrates the song of
the nightingale as something heard throughout the ages, during “ancient days by
emperor and clown”. By connecting his subject to the era of antiquity, he further
glorifies its power and eternity. Yet the reference towards eternity in this
poem is carried on with an underlying tone of sadness. “Where youth grows pale,”
(25), Keats allows his personal observations as to the pains of life to lend
contrast with the beautifully powerful nightingale. In doing so, the eternity
he comprehends is only a dream, perhaps not even achievable in death, and certainly
not obtainable in life.
Essentially, the author ventures
between life and death, exalting the nightingale as something of eternity,
personifying nature as a whole. The eternal beauty of this bird cannot be seen
without a certain sadness however, as the author is wholly aware of the shortcomings
of the mortal world he lives in.
The Forlorn Nightingale
In ‘Ode to a Nightingale’ Keats takes a deeply emotional and ambivalent stance on matters such as the interconnection or mixture of pain and joy, the intensity of feeling and numbness, life and death, mortality and immortality, the actual and the idealized, and finally separation and connection from reality. He begins with an aching heart which he promptly numbs, or at least attempts to do so for he describes a paradoxical ‘numbness pains.” He then rejects his own idea of jealousy when he hears the purely joyous song of the nightingale and fills himself with the nightingales joy to become “too happy.” He falls into a brief fancy of wine until he remembers wine’s tendency to make him “fade away into the forest dim.” He again falls into another fancy, a dark one, of poesy where he follows the bird’s song. This vision is also brief for “like a bell” the word “Forlorn!” drags him out of his imaginary state to face reality. It is interesting that this word has such power; it has more influence than the nightingale itself, for it is in fact the word “forlorn” that the poem centers around. Forlorn is the “shadows numberless” the “never known” feeling of being forlorn lingers like the vibrations of a ringing bell, mustering sensations of “weariness, fever and fret.” Keats is of course very aware of his eventual death, however the bird is immortal because “Thou wast not born for death.” Bells are often rung to alarm a certain time and the word forlorn struck him like a bell as a constant reminder of death. In order to cope he pretends to be numb and he pretends to have visions. He is unable to have a sustained vision, instead he has brief daydreams to escape for as long as he can. However he cannot create a world of painlessness because his imagination is limited to what he knows from the actual world. Thus he cannot successfully escape in either of his reveries, they are both forlorn. He tries to make the experience of the nightingale’s song itself transcendent but he cannot because he must face the fact that each individual experience is limited by reality. His first daydream cannot unfold the way he would like because alcohol (or “vintage”) has a dark side and cannot match the joy of the bird’s song. He also cannot follow the bird’s song in poesy because his mind is unable to create such joy and in trying so hard to be “too happy” and to dance around his forlorn truth he accomplished nothing.